写评价
能把两个句子合成一句,更详细地描述一个人或一样东西。
标注的核心时长。核心模块中有两项未标注时长,因此实际课时比总和更长。
语法
5 分钟定语从句给名词加上一整段描述。
| The man who works here is my brother. | 在这里工作的那个人是我哥哥。 |
| The hotel which we booked was cheap. | 我们订的那家酒店很便宜。 |
| The film that I saw yesterday was good. | 我昨天看的那部电影很好看。 |
用哪个关系代词:
| 指什么 | |
|---|---|
| who | 人 |
| which | 物和动物 |
| that | 人和物都可以(口语里最常用) |
关系代词后面紧跟着另一个主语时,关系代词可以省略:
| The film that I saw = The film I saw | that 后面是 I——可以省略 |
| The man who works here | who 后面直接是动词——不能省略 |
检查方法很简单:关系代词后面紧跟着动词,它就必不可少。这时它本身就是主语,不需要第二个主语: ✗ The man who he works here。
中文母语者的常见错误
已针对你的语言编写不用关系代词。
✗ The man works here is my brother
✓ The man who works here is my brother
。汉语用“的”把描述放在名词前面:“在这里工作的那个人”;英语把描述放在名词后面,要用 who、which 或 that 连起来。后面直接是动词时,关系代词不能省。
多加一个代词。
✗ The man who he works here、✗ The hotel which we booked it → ✓ The man who works here、The hotel which we booked。who、which 已经代替了 he、it,不要再说一遍。
用 which 指人。
✗ The man which works here
✓ who
或 that。汉语的“的”什么都能修饰,英语却要分人和物。
丢掉 -s。
✗ The woman who work at the reception
✓ The woman who works at the reception
。 who 指的是 the woman,动词照样要加 -s。
发音
3 分钟定语从句前面没有停顿——它和名词连在一起,作为一个长的意群说出来:
The film I saw yesterday was very good. /ðə ˈfɪlm aɪ ˈsɔː ˈjestədeɪ/——film 后面不停顿
在这里停顿会改变意思:限定的描述变成了补充说明,那是另一种结构(B1 内容)。现在先连起来说。
课文
3 分钟We stayed in a small hotel which is near the station. The woman who works at the reception speaks four languages. The room we had was clean and quiet, but the breakfast they serve is terrible. It's a place that I can recommend for one or two nights.
练习
8–10 分钟1. 填空。
- The man works here is my brother
- The hotel we booked was cheap
- The woman called you is a doctor
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2. 哪里可以省略关系代词?
1) The film that I saw yesterday. 2) The man who works here. 3) The book which you gave me.
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3. 合成一句。
- I know a man. He works in a bank.
- We booked a hotel. It was near the station.
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4. 改错。
- The man who he works here.
- The man which works here.
- The man works here is my brother.
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小结
本课已学:who、which、that,省略关系代词的规则,不能再加第二个主语。下一课——第27课:“如果”。
核心内容结束
完成练习后即视为课程结束。此后的内容均为可选。
可选
词卡词汇
12 词- review /rɪˈvjuː/ 评价,评论
- recommend /ˌrekəˈmend/ 推荐
- reception /rɪˈsepʃn/ (酒店)前台
- serve /sɜːv/ 供应(饭菜),上(菜)
- disappointing /ˌdɪsəˈpɔɪntɪŋ/ 令人失望的
- excellent /ˈeksələnt/ 极好的,出色的
- service /ˈsɜːvɪs/ 服务
- staff /stɑːf/ 员工,工作人员
- view /vjuː/ 景色,风景
- helpful /ˈhelpfl/ 乐于助人的,热心的
- value /ˈvæljuː/ 价值;性价比
- worth /wɜːθ/ 值得的
写作
写四句话,评价一家酒店或咖啡馆,其中要有两个定语从句。
范例: We stayed in a small hotel which is near the station. The woman who works at the reception speaks four languages. The room we had was clean. It's a place that I can recommend.
检查清单:指人用 who,指物用 which 了吗?没有多加第二个主语吧?