语法 剩余核心内容 ~21 分钟

投诉

完成本课后你将能够

能说出某样东西坏了或者不对劲,而且说得有礼貌。

开始课程 核心 19–21 分钟 · 步骤:6 · 可选:+2

标注的核心时长。核心模块中有两项未标注时长,因此实际课时比总和更长。

语法

5 分钟

英语的投诉不从指责开始,而是从描述问题开始。

There's something wrong with the heating. 暖气有点不对劲。
The shower doesn't work. 淋浴坏了。
The room isn't clean. 房间没打扫干净。
My order hasn't arrived yet. 我订的东西还没到。

I'm afraid——缓和语气的词,说不愉快的事时放在开头。 字面意思是“我害怕”,实际意思是“恐怕”“很抱歉”,和汉语的“恐怕……”很像:

I'm afraid there's a problem with my room. I'm afraid this isn't what I ordered.

句子紧跟在 I'm afraid 后面,不加 of:✗ I'm afraid of there is a problem。

客气地表示不同意,也是同样的思路:

直说——听起来生硬 客气的说法
You're wrong. I'm afraid I don't agree.
No. Actually, I think…
That's not true. I see what you mean, but…

最后提出要求:

Could you fix it, please? 能请您修一下吗?
I'd like to speak to the manager. 我想和经理谈谈。
Could I have a refund? 可以退款吗?
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中文母语者的常见错误

已针对你的语言编写
1

用 must 提要求。

✗ Your hotel is bad、✗ You must fix it → ✓ I'm afraid there's a problem with my room. Could you fix it, please? “你们必须修好”常被直接译成 You must,可是对服务人员这样说就是在下命令。先用 I'm afraid 说出问题,再用 Could you…? 提要求。

2

is not work。

✗ The shower is not work

✓ The shower doesn't work

或 isn't working。汉语一个“不”就够了,英语要么 doesn't + 动词,要么 isn't + -ing。 doesn't work 是“坏了”,isn't working 是“现在用不了”,投诉时两种都行。

3

has something wrong。

✗ The heating has something wrong

✓ There's something wrong with the heating

。“暖气有毛病”里的“有”不译成 has,要说 There's something wrong with + 东西。

4

I'm afraid of。

✗ I'm afraid of there is a problem

✓ I'm afraid there's a problem

。 be afraid of 是“害怕……”,投诉时的 I'm afraid 是“恐怕”,后面直接跟句子。

发音

3 分钟

不满而不失礼貌,靠的是先降后升的语调(fall-rise):

I'm afraid there's a problem ↘↗

平而下降(↘)会让同一句话听起来冷淡、没有商量余地。这和第17课礼貌请求的语调一样,是英语表达礼貌最重要的工具:汉语常靠“请”“麻烦您”和“吧”“呢”这样的语气词显得客气,英语里语调本身就能做到,用词几乎可以不变。

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课文

3 分钟

Good evening. I'm afraid there's a problem with my room.

I'm sorry. What's wrong?

The heating doesn't work and the shower isn't clean.

I do apologise. Could you wait ten minutes? I'll send somebody.

Thank you. And I'd like to change the room, actually.

Of course. I'll see what we have.

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练习

8–10 分钟

1. 填空。

  1. the heating
  2. The shower
  3. this isn't what I ordered
显示答案
There's something wrong with, doesn't work, I'm afraid.

2. 改得更礼貌。

1) You're wrong. 2) Your hotel is bad. 3) Fix it now.

显示答案
I'm afraid I don't agree. / I'm afraid there's a problem with my room. / Could you fix it, please?

3. 配对。

  1. I'm afraid…
  2. Actually…
  3. Could you fix it?
  4. I'd like to speak to the manager.
显示答案
`I'm afraid…` — 缓和语气; `Actually…` — 反驳; `Could you fix it?` — 请求; `I'd like to speak to the manager.` — 找上级.

4. 改错。

  1. You must fix it.(在酒店投诉)
  2. I'm afraid of there is a problem.
显示答案
Could you fix it, please? / Could you please fix it? / Could you fix it? / Can you fix it, please?; I'm afraid there's a problem. / I'm afraid that there's a problem.
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小结

本课已学:说出问题的四种方式,缓和语气的 I'm afraid,客气地表示不同意,请对方修好。下一课——第26课:写评价和定语从句。

核心内容结束

完成练习后即视为课程结束。此后的内容均为可选。

第 62 课

可选

词卡词汇

13 词
  • wrong /rɒŋ/ 不对劲的
  • heating /ˈhiːtɪŋ/ 暖气,供暖
  • shower /ˈʃaʊə/ 淋浴
  • fix /fɪks/ 修理,修好
  • replace /rɪˈpleɪs/ 更换
  • complain /kəmˈpleɪn/ 投诉,抱怨
  • complaint /kəmˈpleɪnt/ 投诉
  • apologise /əˈpɒlədʒaɪz/ 道歉
  • actually /ˈæktʃuəli/ 其实,实际上
  • plumber /ˈplʌmə/ 水管工
  • dirty /ˈdɜːti/ 脏的
  • leak /liːk/ 漏水,渗漏
  • I'm afraid /aɪm əˈfreɪd/ 恐怕,很抱歉

写作

写四句话,向酒店投诉:哪里不对劲,你希望怎么解决。

范例: I'm afraid there's a problem with my room. The heating doesn't work and the shower isn't clean. Could you fix it, please? I'd like to change the room.

检查清单:投诉以缓和语气的词开头了吗?提要求用的是 Could you 吗?

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