Describe people and places exactly
I can add a description to a noun — one that tells you which, and one that adds extra information — and I understand the difference between them.
Declared core time. Two of the core blocks carry no figure at all, so the real lesson is longer than this sum.
Grammar
15 minIn A2 #26 you joined two sentences with who, which, that and described a person or a thing in more detail. Then all the clauses were of one kind. In fact there are two kinds, and a comma tells them apart.
A defining clause — without commas. It answers the question "which one exactly?" and picks the thing out from others. Without it, you don't know who is meant:
The woman who lives next door is a nurse. — Which woman? The one who lives next door.
A non-defining clause — between commas. We already know who or what is meant, and the clause only tells us something more about it. If you take it out, the meaning doesn't suffer:
My mother, who is seventy, still works. — I have only one mother; the clause simply adds her age.
The test: leave the clause out. If it is still clear who or what is meant, the clause is non-defining, and you need commas. If not, it is defining, without commas.
Compare. The same words, but a different meaning:
| My brother who lives in Italy is a doctor. | I have several brothers; I mean the one who lives in Italy. |
| My brother, who lives in Italy, is a doctor. | I have one brother; the clause just adds where he lives. |
What else is different:
| defining | non-defining | |
|---|---|---|
| commas | no | yes |
| that instead of who and which | possible | not possible |
| the relative word can be left out | yes, if a new subject comes after it | no |
The film (that) we saw was boring — you can drop that, because we comes after it. In a non-defining clause the relative word always stays: The film, which we saw last week, was boring. Non-defining clauses are more frequent in writing; in conversation people often say two separate sentences instead.
All the relative words:
| for | example | |
|---|---|---|
| who | people | the woman who called |
| which | things and animals | the car which I bought |
| that | people and things, only in a defining clause | the book that you lent me |
| whose | possession: his, her, its, their | the man whose car was stolen |
| where | a place | the town where I grew up |
| when | a time | the summer when we met |
whose replaces his, her, their, its: I met a woman. Her son goes to my school. → I met a woman whose son goes to my school. A noun comes straight after whose, with no article. It works for things too: a house whose windows face the sea — although people more often say a house with windows facing the sea.
where or which. where means "in which", "at which" and stands for a whole place. But if the verb in the clause has its own object — you visited what, you saw what — you need which or that:
| the town where I live | live where? — where |
| the town (that) I visited | visited what? — that or nothing |
The preposition goes to the end. In many languages the preposition comes before the relative word: French l'homme avec qui je travaille, German der Mann, mit dem ich arbeite. In English it stays with its verb, at the end of the clause: the man (who) I work with, the flat (that) we live in, the people I spoke to. The version the man with whom I work exists, but it sounds very formal.
when is often left out after time words: I remember the day (when) we met.
More examples:
| Edinburgh, which is the capital of Scotland, has a famous festival. | Edinburgh — non-defining: there is only one Edinburgh. |
| The flat we live in is quite small. | No relative word; the preposition in at the end. |
| Is that the café where you had breakfast? | where — the place of the breakfast. |
| July is the month when most people go on holiday. | when — a time. |
Don't say this. ✗ The book which I bought it yesterday is good → ✓ The book which I bought yesterday is good. The object of the clause is already named by which; a second it is not needed.
Check yourself. Do you need commas in My father who is a doctor works in Leeds? Why can't you say the town where I visited? How do you join the people and I work with them into one phrase without whom?
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Common learner errors
written for your languageA comma out of habit
German, Polish and Czech always separate a relative clause with commas. In English a comma changes the meaning. The students, who live in the city centre, pay more means that all the students live in the centre and all of them pay more. To say "those students who live in the centre", use no commas: The students who live in the city centre pay more.
that in a non-defining clause
✗ My brother, that lives in Italy, is a doctor
✓ My brother, who lives in Italy, is a doctor
French qui, Spanish que and German der work with and without commas, so that seems just as universal. But after a comma there is never that — only who or which.
where or what instead of that
✗ This is the town where I visited → ✓ This is the town I visited: where already means "in which", so it can't be the object of visit. ✗ The film what we saw was boring → ✓ The film (that) we saw was boring: what means "the thing that" and does not come after a noun.
who her instead of whose
✗ I met a woman who her son goes to my school
✓ I met a woman whose son goes to my school
Arabic, Hebrew and Persian say "a woman that her son…". In English one word, whose, does both jobs.
The preposition before who
✗ the people with who I work
✓ the people I work with
French avec qui, Spanish con quien and German mit denen put the preposition first. In English it goes to the end, after its verb.
Pronunciation
3 minThe commas of a non-defining clause can be heard — they are pauses:
My brother ‖ who lives in Italy ‖ is a doctor.
The clause itself sounds a little lower and faster, like a remark in brackets. In a defining clause there is no pause, it all goes as one phrase:
My brother who lives in Italy is a doctor.
This is a rare case when a punctuation mark can be heard: by ear the two sentences differ precisely in the pauses.
whose /huːz/ sounds exactly like who's. that in a relative clause is unstressed, /ðət/: the book that you lent me — /ðə ˈbʊk ðət juː ˈlent miː/.
Text
5 minThe town where I grew up is on the north-east coast of England, about an hour from Newcastle. It's the kind of place that most people drive through without stopping.
My grandfather, who was born there in 1938, worked at the port all his life. The port, which was once the busiest on that part of the coast, closed in the eighties, and many families lost their main income.
We lived in a narrow house that looked straight out at the sea. The room I slept in was at the top, and on windy nights I could hear the waves. The house has been sold twice since then, and the people who live there now have painted it bright blue.
Last summer I went back for a weekend. In a café near the harbour I met an old man whose father had worked with my grandfather. He remembered the winter when the harbour froze — something my grandfather had told me about, but I had never quite believed. We talked for two hours, and before I left he showed me an old photo that he kept in his wallet: both our families on the beach, all smiling at the camera.
Exercises
30 min1. Put in who, which, whose, where or when.
- The town I grew up is on the coast
- The man car was stolen called the police
- I'll never forget the day we met
- My grandmother, is ninety, still lives alone
- Our flat, is on the fifth floor, has no lift
- Is this the café you had breakfast?
- She's the colleague I told you about
- I met a girl brother plays for Arsenal
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2. Join the two sentences into one.
- I met a man. + His father knew my grandfather.
- My sister lives in Rome. + She is a teacher. (I have one sister)
- This is the house. + I was born in this house. (where)
- The film was boring. + We saw it last night.
- Edinburgh is the capital of Scotland. + It has a famous festival.
- The people are very friendly. + I work with them.
- I remember the summer. + We went to Wales that summer. (when)
- The hotel was very expensive. + We stayed in it.
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3. Rewrite, adding commas
- My mother who is a nurse works at night.
- The woman who lives next door is a nurse.
- London which is the capital of the UK is very expensive.
- The book that you lent me was great.
- Our neighbours who moved here last year have two dogs. (we have no other neighbours)
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4. Error correction.
- My brother, that lives in Italy, is a doctor.
- This is the town where I visited last year.
- The film what we saw was boring.
- The man which lives next door is a pilot.
- The book which I bought it yesterday is very good.
- I met a woman who her son goes to my school.
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5. Say it in English.
Each line describes a situation in simple words. Say it in one sentence with the forms of this lesson. 1) You grew up in a town. The town is by the sea. 2) Your father was born in 1950. He still works. You have only one father. 3) Show someone a man. Somebody stole his car. 4) You work with some people. They are very friendly. 5) One day you and your family moved house. You remember that day.
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6. Describe the place where you grew up.
Four or five sentences: at least one defining clause, one non-defining clause and one clause with whose, where or when.
Example: I grew up in a small town where everybody knew everybody. Our school, which was built in the sixties, was next to the river. My best friend was a boy whose parents ran the bakery. The house we lived in has been sold.
Summary
Covered: defining and non-defining clauses and the role of the comma, that only in a defining clause, when the relative word can be left out, whose, where against which, when, the preposition at the end of the clause. Next — lesson 18: review of lessons 13–17.
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Vocabulary for your deck
15 words- grow up /ˌɡrəʊ ˈʌp/ to become an adult (I grew up in a small town)
- coast /kəʊst/ the land next to the sea
- port /pɔːt/ a town or a place where ships come in and are loaded
- harbour /ˈhɑːbə/ an area of water by the coast where boats are safe
- narrow /ˈnærəʊ/ not wide
- wave /weɪv/ a line of water that moves across the sea towards the shore
- windy /ˈwɪndi/ with a lot of wind
- freeze /friːz/ to become ice
- income /ˈɪnkʌm/ the money you get from work or in other ways
- whose /huːz/ of whom; which person's
- nurse /nɜːs/ a person who looks after ill people in a hospital
- capital /ˈkæpɪtl/ the main city of a country, where the government is
- pilot /ˈpaɪlət/ a person who flies a plane
- face /feɪs/ to have its windows or front towards something (a house that faces the sea)
- all his life /ˌɔːl hɪz ˈlaɪf/ for all the years he lived
Writing
Six sentences about the place where you grew up, or about a person who means a lot to you. Three relative clauses: one defining and two non-defining.
Example
The village my grandparents lived in is in the hills. My grandmother, who was a teacher, knew every family there. She worked at the village school for thirty years. Her neighbour, whose garden was full of roses, always gave us apples. The house was sold after she died. I still have her letters.
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